martes, 21 de marzo de 2017
Journal Entry #1
Hello dear 9C students! You are my favorite of them all by far! :) But I do wish you guys could clean up after yourselves EVERYDAY! On a lighter side, this is where you guys should post your Journal Entry #1 Writing Prompts 1, 2 and eventually #3 . Don't forget to include a title for each, make it attractive and appealing to the reader! Check my post 1 so that you can read my reply to your TAG about the class! Best regards...
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ResponderBorrarJE#1 WP#1
ResponderBorrarDiscovering Myself
My mame is María Sandoval, I was born on January 30th 2002. I am 15 years old, my father died when I was 5 years old, my mom has been and will continue being always my inspiration, a pure example of moving on no matter how hard the situation is. She has thought me many things, the most important is to serve others without waiting the same thing from them, to never forget from where I come. I'm an olive skin girl, medium size. I care too much of other people happiness, I give to much from me to other people and try to help others no matter if I am the one that needs help. I love my family and even though sometimes it doesn't seem that way, if they need me I'll always be there with my heart and arms open. One of the things I've learned these years is to know very well the people I'll give a space in my heart, sometimes people don't know how much they mean to us that even with small actions they can hurt us.
I like how you included your mom and show that she is a good example for you.
BorrarWhy is other people happines such an important thing to you?
Maybe you could be a little more descriptive to make your writing more interesting.
JE#1 WP1
ResponderBorrarThe Time Of My Life
My name is Paola,I'm 15 years old.I have brown skin, dark eyes and I wear glasses. My favourite book is “The Curious World of Calpurnia Tate", by Jacqueline Kelly.I love it because it taught me a lot about science. Personally I think I'm very Romantic and pretty sensible. I'm smart and very mature about my decisions. I enjoy Art and Science classes. I think I'm Funny,but sometimes I act a bit more serious(specially when I'm with people I don't like).My biggest fear is becoming someone that I don't like, or know, it's like not knowing yourself. Music is my favourite thing in the world, I love to hear and play it. Actually I'm quite good at singing, I play the Violin too. Well something I don't really like is Hippocrate people. I have always thought that real friends are really hard to find, and that when you find them you have to be careful, in order for not losing them.Usually I can consider someone a friend when I trust them.I always try to think Positive, because there is always a way to get out of the tunnel.I absolutely love my pets, and I believe that animals should be treated well,and must never be abused. What I love the most in my life is God, for so many reasons,like he gives me strength to overcome all the obstacles in my life.
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ResponderBorrar"What I am"
ResponderBorrarWhat I think? What I say? What I look like? What people think I am? I really don't care. I'm s girl that is not the tallest of the line. I'm not the preetiest of my class, but I know that I'm pretty and unic at my own way. My eye's color are brown no green, no blue, no grey, no light are brown. Myself is not perfect, I make errors like everyone. I like to help my friends, well everyone in everything I can help. I try to be friendly and socialize with everyone. I'm q honest and calm person. I don't have the best thoughts in the world. Every time I'm thinking has a reason like I'm thinking on ways how to help ir go out from a difficult situation. My imagination is basically all in my future of course, if the things that I imagine are in the plans of god. Another thing about me is that I have an imagination like the one of a little kid.
Alexandra
T- Ilike how you think of yourself its really good to be like that.
BorrarA-do you like the way you think?
G-It was a wonderfull journal, but you should be carefull with your spelling.
Lucia Hersperger
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ResponderBorrarKnowing Myself
ResponderBorrarMy name is Valeria Castelar Rivera. I am a very short girl, with brown hair and I use glasses. One of my favorite hobbies is to draw. I have two brothers, one is my twin brother, Jose Adan, and the other one is my older brother, Ivan Andre. Some other things I enjoy when I'm alone is to listen to music, it makes me feel free of all problems and it helps me alot. Also I love to eat, each time I get my hands on food I just eat it straight away, I enjoy food more than anything to be honest. I've heard that I'm a nice person to hang around even though I'm not sure about it but if people enojoy my attitude then I guess it's ok.So yeah, that was a brief description about me.
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BorrarT:I really like how real you are when you say you love food.
BorrarA: What's like to have a twin?
G: why don't you add more about your hobbies.
My Myself and I
ResponderBorrarI was born on March 27 2002 my family were the best family ever we make jokes we go to restaurants every single day we make trips every weekend. When i was 5 years old i star to notice that my dad and Mom where figthing every single day. When I was 6 My Mom and Dad get divorced it was very difficult for me because I really love my family and I wanted to be a family forever.I decide to stay with my mother because I was more happy with her cause my dad have a lot of rules,well now that I stay more with my father because my mom says that my Dad is more extrict with my greats in school .Now at this day Im happy with parents they dont fight anymore I try with all eforts to have good grades .I really like basketball and football Im best in baketball this we are going to win 3 place or 1 place we will do everything to win and in footballwe are going to do everything
Kenneth Hernandez
TAG
BorrarI like how you describe your family.
Why is basketball your favorite sport?
I think that if you dont repeat to much the same words, your grammar would get better.
JE#1
ResponderBorrarWP#1
That's Me.
My complete name is Carlos Andrés Pinto Padgett. I am fifteen-years old. I was born on the tenth of August of 2001. My father's name is Edwin and my mother's name is Karen. I have two sisters, an older one and one younguest. The older one is called Clara she is 17 years old and the younguest is called Isabela she is 12 years old. I am a tall guy, with light hair color, with light skin color, and I have brown eyes. My favorite sport is soccer, I can spend a lot of time playing soccer. I also like to listen music. I don't like to stay on the same place a lot of time, I am that kind of person that likes to be moving around from one place to another. I love to make trips, specially if I need to walk and to learn new things. Something that I hate is the alcohol and the cigarrette. I am a very moody person. I have a lot of feelings,I am a very sympathic person. I am a very good person, I love my body and the most important I love me.
I like the way you described you personality physically and psychologically.
BorrarWhat was your favorite trip so far?
You should be careful with you spelling and your grammar as well.
Journal Entry #1
ResponderBorrarWP #1
All of Me
In this journal entry, I will describe myself and my life. So, instead of getting directly to the thick of my life, I think it might be important to introduce myself in all honesty. As well to introduce some of the key people in my life. So here we go... My name is Mariangel Robles Mineros. I don't have a middle name. I'm a fifteen year old girl living in a Tegucigalpa, Honduras. I have brown hair and brown eyes, whuch i find incredibly boring. I am a short girl and I really don't care. I was born on February thirteen, two thousand and two. Not sure why that's revelant, but I thought that I should write it. I love to read, eat, watch youtube videos, and obviously binge watch on Netflix. I like to dance too. I am consider to be a very funny person, but when I meet new people I'm very awkward and shy. The most important people in my life is my family and friends. Because they mean everything to me and they are there for me. This is all, this is part of me.
Mariangel Robles
T= I like your hobbies and the way you describe yourself.
BorrarA= Why do you find boring having Brownish hair?
G= I suggest you to write more of your personality.
~Maria Sandoval
Get to know myself.
ResponderBorrarMy name is Fredy Rodríguez, I was born on May 1st of 2002. At first sight what you may see is a guy that is at the age of 16 or at least that's what I hear from a lot of people, but actually I'm 14 years old. The reason why people tell me this is because of my height, I'm very tall. My hair has a dark tone of brown and my eyes have dark brown tone as well. My body type is skinny, but I like eating a lot. About my personality, I'm just cool with everything and have a lot of patience, I'm also kind and like to help others, I like giving advices when I'm asked since they're very helpful. I consider myself a smart person, but I'm also lazy, I may understand a topic but if there is more work involved I just don't do it.
T - i really like how you describe youre self in a very good way
BorrarA-how would you make your personality help you in life?
G- i think you shoukd have a little bir of careful with the comas.
JE#1 WP1
ResponderBorrarJose Escobar
So my full name is Jose Daniel Escobar Heriquez.I am normal boy, I like to play videogames and watch netflix.I was born in August 8 2001.I have one brother, named Illgnner.He is the best brother in the world, he takes me everywhere I want. I like to go out with my friends and have some fun.Also I like to hear music such as techno.Now lets talk about my appearence I have black hair and brown eyes.Sometimes my laugh makes everyone laugh cause its very funny and weird.My hobbie is watching scary movies all night with some friends.Everyday I think about my mistakes and that everything happens for a reason.So yeah thats me and my life.
Je1
ResponderBorrarWP1
Who am I
Who am I ? that's a tough question , maybe one of the hardest questions ever. Sometimes for the people is very difficult to describe them self. T think that it is very hard because we don't know ourselves very much. anyways I will start by telling who am I on the inside first of all I think that what describes me the most is the I am crazy, very crazy. I also think that that's what people notices first about me.Being crazy is not my fault. I come from a very crazy family and may friends are also crazy . what can a do? my whole life revolves around craziness. I think or at least I try to very respectful , because that is something my mom always taught me. I consider my self a person with a lot of moral values. I may not be the most intelligent or athletic but that doesn't bothers me .I have dark hair and dark eyes .I also have wavy hair . I don't know what happened but my hair stayed in the middle of strait and curly. so this is a short description of me I hope you like it.
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ResponderBorrarJe1
WP1
Who am I
Who am I ? that's a tough question , maybe one of the hardest questions ever. Sometimes for the people is very difficult to describe them self. T think that it is very hard because we don't know ourselves very much. anyways I will start by telling who am I on the inside first of all I think that what describes me the most is the I am crazy, very crazy. I also think that that's what people notices first about me.Being crazy is not my fault. I come from a very crazy family and may friends are also crazy . what can a do? my whole life revolves around craziness. I think or at least I try to very respectful , because that is something my mom always taught me. I consider my self a person with a lot of moral values. I may not be the most intelligent or athletic but that doesn't bothers me .I have dark hair and dark eyes .I also have wavy hair . I don't know what happened but my hair stayed in the middle of strait and curly. so this is a short description of me I hope you like it
T-I like the way you expressed yourself
BorrarA-Why do you think you are crazy?
G-you have to be more possitive
JE#1 WP#1
ResponderBorrarWhat You Should Know About Me
My name is Carlos Manuel Garay Villeda, I'm a highschool student at La Estancia School, one of the best school in Honduras. I'm in the class 9-C. I'm a kind of tall guy. I have dark brown eyes and dark brown hair. My skin color is kind of brown or white. Well more of like a combination. I'm sure you know what i mean. I'm a happy, kind, optimistic (sometimes), protective, caring, sensitive and unsensitive guy. I guess you could say i'm pretty cruel sometimes. I'm just a complicated guy, that's it. I would love to be a videogame developer in the future. I'm not sure I can make it but I have to try. It's just a dream job after all. I would love to have that job! I'm also planning to study in the University of Arts. But then again, it's just a dream. And that's me. Carlos Manuel Garay Villeda.
I like how you truly express about yourself. Why you want in the future be a videogame developer? I suggest you to describe about your personality.
BorrarJE#1 WP#2
ResponderBorrarFriends are the Family We Choose
While we grow we get to know new people, maybe from.other countries, cultures etc. It depend of us who will we choose to stay and share important events. Friends are the family we choose, those persons that help you even if the situation it's difficult. A real friend is the one that knows everything about you and will always be there by your side when you fall fall down. We always need to be good persons. We don't know when we will need from someone, sometimes we don't know how hard can be the situation someone is passing by, and if we are nice with them maybe we can help them to be stronger and pass the problem without difficulties, sometimes we can just make them feel better and make them know they have someone to count with, not only in good moments if not in bad moments too.
WP 2
ResponderBorrar"Friends are Family"
What is a Friend? They are many types of friendship. One the is more united than other, and other that are your family. The word Friend for me means a person that is always there for you. The type of person that you know that you can count on them, and will always help you. The person that you can tell something and they will keep it like a secret and never say anything. The person that will make you laugh in those dayss you see everything grey and will make you see the things clear. A friendship is not of only one can be of many. Friends will always make memories you will never remember. "A friendship is not about how many years you have with that person, if how true and comfortable make you feel when you are with them."
Alexandra
JE#1 WP#2
ResponderBorrarThe Impossible,but not that Impossible Mission
At some point of my life I thought that friends weren't real and that it was all some sort of “game". I thought of this because the ones that I called my friends once,betrayed me. But when I changed of school everything was different, the first thing I noticed was that many people was smiling at me, and they talked to me as well.After that I felt loved by friends again, so I realized that now I have some special individuals that I can call friends.A friend for me is that one that doesnt care about your past at all, wants you to have a better present and future.A friend can be your pet or whatever ,but for me the greatest friend you'll have in your entire life will be God, he is always by my side and will never desert me. You can trust always in a real friend, and he or she won't tell anyone your secrets. But be really careful because there's always bad people that may tell you that they are your friends, but they are only playing with your feelings. So in conclusion I think that real friends are absolutely awesome, but be careful by choosing them, and when you get one take care of her/him because, remember, they also have feelings.
I like how you talk about friend and that god will always be ther for you
BorrarWhy did you did not like being with your other friends at your old school
I like to hear more about what happen to you at your other school and can give me more details not only the tope of the iceberg but entirely
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ResponderBorrarMy friends are very important to me because they make me happy with them I make stupid things and said things that make us laugh I said my secret to them they are cool they are awesome my friends are the best they give me food,they help in my problems we play football and basketball they have help me in school in my homework and the best thing about them is that we say a lot of jokes
ResponderBorrarVery poor Kenneth! Must redo! ASAP!
BorrarJP#1
ResponderBorrarWP#2
Partner in Crime.
What is a partner in crime? Well a partner in crime is that person called best friend. A best friend us a person well a very unique person that is above all the other persons called friends. A best friend is like a clone of yourself or a very similar person based on personality or other things. That best friend helps you on everything on any kind of thing no matter what, wil help you or will guide you on the good way, if that person don't do that so that's not a good friend or a best friend. That friend will try to be with you and protect you of all bad things or person if that best friend do that then your best friend is a very good one and you need to keep that friend always because there are a tiny quantity of good friends that want a good future for you and really cares about you. So thats what I call a "Best Friend"
I really liked the title you chose for your prompt.
BorrarWho is your best friend?
You should be careful with your grammar.
My name is Jorge Alberto Zelaya Ruiz im in 9 grade at La Estancia School.I am medium size,im thin and have big feet.I like to sleep also to go to Galeria,I domt like doing homework.I like to play soccer,i was on a team named Motagua.I like to listen music,my favorite song is Sucker For Pain from Wiz Khalifa,Imagine Dragons,Logic,TyDolla Sign and X Ambassadors and Lil wayne.I like a lot to play video games and to watch netflix.I have nails stock on my wrist.Because i had an accident when i was 12 years old,playing soccer.I dont like doing big projects,like the ones on act pra, I dont like art also,it is to much work and im lazy to paint
ResponderBorrarJE#1 WP2
ResponderBorrarBest person in the world
What is a friend? Thats an easy question for some people,but if you think about it, its difficult.For me a friend is someone who cares about you, loves you, makes you favors and would do anything for you.So for me there are many types of friends.The best friends are the ones you can tell them anything and would always be right there for you no matter what.No matter what happen she or he would always be your best friend.Now the good friends are like the normal friends.They have fun with you and would help you no matter what.Also they are the bad friends, who lies to you and acts like if they are you friend because they want to take advantage of you.I have many friend that take care of me and would do anything for me.So yeah thats what I think a friend is.
JE#1 WP#2
ResponderBorrarFriends Are...
A friend is someone you rely on. A friend is someone that must be there for you at all times. Someone that will be with you in the good and bad times. They are that kind of people that you can trust for the rest of the days. You can hang out with them all the time and have any kind of conversations with them. They can also help you with anything you need. I have really good friends if you ask me. People i can rely on myself. I talk and play with them everyday. We also make jokes and sometimes we fight with each other and start insulting. But at the end we are still friends. Some people who you call "friends" might not be your friends as you think they are, so you really have to be carefull with who you choose as a friend, remember that. It's a very important thing you will always have to remember.
ANA RODAS 9C
BorrarT: I enjoyed how you put your feelings into writting this promt.
A: How do you met your friends? Describe
G: You should give examples and add your own personal experiences with your friends
JP#1 WE#1
ResponderBorrarKnowing me
I am a very happy person, I like to play a lot of sports such as basketball and volleyball, but my favorite is basketball, because is a game where you have to think, is very fast and you have to be a smart, and you have to be very strong. Because this game has a lot of physical contact you can have a very bad injury.i had one in my back it was so painful. I also love to eat pizza, is one of my favorite food to eat, also I like to eat all types of pastas because they are so damn delicious.my favorite color is black because black combines with everything. I have four brothers Fer,Marlon,Ana I'm the youngest one I'm 15 years old ana is 20, fee is 21 and Marlon is 18 he is going to universal next year. He and me fight a lot. I'm the only one still at school and all my brothers already graduated.
I really like basketball too!
BorrarHow did you get injured?
I suggest you to use capital letter when you are starting a new sentence.
Mariangel
JP#2 WE#2
ResponderBorrarSomeone there for you
A friend is someone that will always be there for you no matter what happens and they will always try to help you always try to cheer you up an make you smile and that would do anything for you and will try his best to help you with any problem you have in life. And will try to solve it with you and be at your side no matter how many ups and down you have you know they'll be there to support you and will always understand you just by making a face it's like if you make a face he is the only one that will understand because he know you and he knows how are you that's the best felling knowing that no matter what they'll always be there to support you and that's awesome. Because you have the support of them and there are less people this times to do that for you so you have to take care of your friends no matter what you also have to support them and make them smile because the best thing in a friendship is that you are always there for you and he will also be there for you.
I like how you describe what friends means to you.
BorrarWho is your best friend?
I suggest you to check your spelling.
WP#1 , JE#1
ResponderBorrarDescribe your self
- everything I am
My name is claudia daniela santos huete , am fourteen years old and my birthday is on june twenty first. I was born in hospital san felipe, that is my general and basic information. I mostly like being in bed , because am so so lazy , another thing i love is to eat and watch Netflix, but sometimes i like to play my favorite sport that is volleyball even though is hard to go to practice everyday day but Instill love it. But when am not watching Netflix or eating am doing literally nothing, or in my cellphone and hate but really hate going to school.
-claudia santos 9-C
I like the way you express you're sincerly.
BorrarWhy is it to hard for you going every day to you're Volleyball practice?
I suggest you to use capital letters on names. That it will make it a little bit better.
WP#2 JE#2
ResponderBorrarMy friend
- First of all and the most important thing is to know what is a friend , a friend is a person that always helps you and supports you in any type of circumstances. That person that will always fight with you and necer leave you alone even is your rich or poor. Another thing that ir very very important is to know who are you're real fiends and the fake ones taht anybody want , that is the type of friend that you should throw to the trashcan
And never wait for them because you will die wainting .but the real fiends are the ones you should keep forever and never leave them go , the real friends are the ones that will never but never leave you alone, as well you will never leave them alone, thay are something that will keep always a piece of space in your heart. They are special people that love all your craziness and all your imperfections and they will understand you and help you if you need it , best friends are generally a very small amount, better to have a couple of friends than to have thousands of fake friends that are never going to be with you in your upps and downs , maybe just in youre ups . I sincerely recomend you to take care of ypur friends because we never know.
JE#1 WP#2
ResponderBorrarCount on them
"You can count on me like one, two, three, I'll be there. And I know when I need it I can count on you like four, three, two you'll be there. 'Cause that's what friends are supposed to do." I decided to start this journal entey with one of my favorite song 'Count on me' because I think that this song tell us that a friend can count on you and likewise, they will always be there. Friendship to me, is one of the most important things in life. We all need support, love, and try to make us happy when we are down. I'm so happy that I can say that I have friends, I wouldn't change them. In fact, my friends are the most important treasure in my life. But there's always that one best friend you feel more comfortabke with, someone that you can trust. Trust is one of the most important qualities that we need in a friendship. Friends shares the same interest, almost the same. That's why we like to be with each other. When I'm mad with one of my friends, no matter how mad we are, always we will end up sorting it out. Finally, it doesn't matter how many friends you have, it does matter that they are always with you in the bad and good times.
Mariangel
T I like the way how you describe your friends
BorrarA who is your best friend?
G I will suggest if you can metion the name of your friend
WP#1 , JE#1
ResponderBorrarMy Life not yours, My decisions not yours....
Hey there, My Name is Andrea Nicolle Abadie Suazo. I am 14 Years old, I was born in Hospital Viera On July 25th ,2002 at 9:33pm This is one part of my personal info. Now lets talk about what I like ! I Love to eat ! And yes then I complain Im fat! ha ha ha but Im fat so what ?. I Love to sleep ! I can sleep 24 hours and just get up to eat its Lit ! ha ha ha. I love to see netfilx at bed in a cold day:) I love to chat with my friends ! chatting is what I love the most of all I have mentioned ! well I just told you a little bit of my life ! hope you enjoy..
-Abadie
WP#1 JE#2
ResponderBorrarWhat a Friend means to me...
Well a friend is that person that is with you in your good and bad moments!.The one who advises you for good and helps you! My friends are Adriana Zelaya what has she done? well she advises me always and helps me with my school things ! she is always there for me
And I really appreciate it a lot and there are no words to describe how much I love her ! . Maria Yacaman! Although we were enemies before now she is one of my best friends! she is always there to Correct me in all types of mistakes! and i love her ! Abril Giron! Omg what can I say about that little girl? When she sees me crying she always tries to cheer me up, i just love her !And the last nothing more and nothing less than Maria Velasquez! With which I always fight and after a while we bother each other in a funny way ! This girls and other ones are the ones that make my day when im sad !
Me Myself and I
ResponderBorrarMy mame is Lucia Hersperger, I was born on February 7th 2002. I am 15 years old, my mother died when I was 9 years old, my dad has been mother and father , but now he is recreating his life. Well I could give my life for the people I love.I am always there if people need something,but of course we all have a dark side and very unic side by the way.I get along with people easily , because thats my way of being.And throwout the years my heart had hardened up , because everyone have bad situations that make you realize things. Also I can say this last two years i had change in a good way .Last but not least at home im very mature person.
Friends in the hood
ResponderBorrarWell for me a friend is someone you can count on, someone you can share a shoulder to cry.And know that they are and they will be there for you as you are there for them. In my opinion having a friend is someone you can do crazy stuff together and learn from the mistakes. I say friendhip shows you how to be stable or in order, and you can prosper together. Having a friend makes you happy, gives you joy , and makes you laugh when all you want is to cry or they just cry along with you if its nessesary . Partner in crime.